Team Whakataukī

Team Whakataukī

Wednesday, June 7, 2017

Star writer

Nathan is the WOW writer of the week in Mrs H's writing class. 

He wrote an awesome story about his Lego creation. 

We are all very proud of you Nathan!

Nathan's amazing story
A very happy Nathan after visiting Mrs Sweney
 and getting a special pencil!

7 comments:

  1. Hi Nathan,

    I love your choice of words in your writing; they are very descriptive! I especially liked the words 'upgraded' and 'thrusters'. Well done!

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  2. hey middle team i like your writing and lots of description and it looks like your really proud thanks Jaide room 18

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  3. kia ora middle team! i would like to say well done to Nathan, especially with those great descriptive words. keep going guys!

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  4. well done Nathan winning smile very riviting

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  5. KIA Ora Nathan,

    I like the very descriptive words in your writing and it made me think of a big overpowering army truck that had a lot of power Great job Nathan.

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